Wednesday 30 December 2009

finaly my frist project since Uni

it has taken me some time to get all this done, but its been hard i miss the kit and free prossesing and NEG SCANNERS (your going to have to excuse the quitlty of the images asjessops scanned, the files are tiny) but im happy with the look of them i think it works wooo.

so any way the idea of these images is that im looking at the term "keeping up with the jones" wich is kinda all about competing with ur neighbor having the nieces garden on the street or the best car,












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  1. Anonymous30 December 2009 at 10:09

    Exellent stuff Joe.

    It just lacks a little continuity, maybe cut it down to like 6 and make it a stronger series, for a reference see stuart whipps project on a similar ground. where everything is perfect in terms of composition, depth and allignment.

    But that aside I love it, great title too...

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  2. Unknown30 December 2009 at 11:14

    Hi Joe, it's jenna here! Great work but like Stew said - composition isn't perfect and I think it is really important that it is in order to stregthen it as a body! Try following the vertical lines rather than the horizontal, as some of the properties apppear to be on none level roads which could be interesting aesthetically and add to what you're trying to say. I think also, it lacks a little intimacy- not sure if it would work better you being closer or further away from the subject- might be worth experimenting? A great start though. Can't wait to see how it progresses!!

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  3. Unknown30 December 2009 at 13:29

    Loving the idea. like Capper and Jenna have commented it needs a bit of continuity. My favorite images are the last two due o the fact that the apex of the roof is allined and the bottom the image is based with lawn. Where are the cars?, and is the house/bungalows on one street? Definetly re-shoot, great idea.

    (P.S TITlE IDEA, The Alport Close Collection

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  4. joefaulkner30 December 2009 at 15:50

    yer i agree i wana re shoot when i get some better kit, all the pictures were hand held i need a TRYPOD. i want my lines to all be right!!!!

    and did i say jessops are shit!!!! i miss college and all its kit

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  5. joefaulkner30 December 2009 at 16:20

    oh yes one street be cheating if it wasnt

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  6. Dan Baker31 December 2009 at 04:39

    liking the new work Joe!.. Love the third from top

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